Everybody in this world
deserves a second chance. People may have done something unforgivable in
their life but with the great willingness to change, why can’t we give
them another shot in their life? Currently, gang fight, robbery, drugs,
prostitution and murdering are no longer only committed by adults; there
is actually a growing amount of minor offenders or juveniles. The
numbers of juveniles’ crimes have proliferated and become one of the
largest public concerns in the society. To overcome this issue,
government established a juvenile justice system that diverts the youth
offenders away from adult prison, and functions in encouraging
rehabilitation based on the juveniles’ needs. Mark Salzman, the author
of “True Notebook: A Writer’s Year at Juvenile Hall”, shares his notable
experiences in teaching writing for the students who most of them are
murderer. Giving lectures at juvenile hall had changed Mark’s
perspective of juveniles. Also, the informant Steve Mitchell who is an
active officer in juvenile hall gives his view of the significance of
the juvenile justice system as well. After reading the book and having
had an interview session, I came to the thought that the juveniles
should not be treated as adults; they should be given an opportunity to
change themselves through rehabilitation.
Reading the book “True Notebook” has changed my perspective about teenagers who commit crime. Firstly,
I feel that the juvenile justice system is redundant as the juveniles
are most likely to lose the case and sentenced to be housed in jail for a
long period of time. The
juvenile hall only act as a mean of transportation as these juveniles
will be sent to adult prison once they reach the age of 18. Based
on my initial judgment, if someone commits a crime, regardless of their
age, should not be forgiven and given second chance as it is their
nature to commit crime and it is almost impossible to change someone
nature. However, my judgment was altered; the book and interview session
has changed my perception about juvenile justice system. Steven
Mitchell argues that by locking the juveniles for months will not change
anything, as what they really need are programs that can help to shape
their mind and behavior.
So,
once they are released to the society, they would not repeat the same
mistakes again. Juvenile hall provides education, meditation,
psychiatric medication and other volunteer activities for the
delinquents. He believes that through these programs, the juveniles’
characters are reshaped where it will make significant changes on their
behavior. They were trapped in dark side of the world and we ought to
help them through juvenile hall.
Parents have significant roles in juvenile crime .The absences of
their figures is the main reason why kids bear criminal behaviors and
join gangs. Victor, one of Mark’s students, denounces the society as
they judge him without knowing what condition forces him to commit youth
delinquency. He has no father who can provide his family needs. His
mother does not care about his education and even insisted him to look
for a job. Victor writes, “[the society] don’t know what it’s like to
grow up not having a role model in your life”(290). Parents are the
first members of primary socialization and their presence is crucial as
it the growth of child’s behavior. It is their duty to protect and to
educate their child, but nowadays, there are many children who are
deprived from it. Consequently, these adolescents might end up joining
gangs as they are getting the attention and protection from their fellow
gang members, the attention and protection they are lacking from their
parents. Mostly, these juveniles are having problems with their
families at home and it triggers their urge to find other social groups,
like gangs, that will provide them with affection instead of problems
and also accepting them as who they are. This marks the start of their
delinquency, as their parents are not there to guide and punish them.
Thus, by sentencing them behind the bars would not change their behavior
but instead, making it worse. Therefore, they ought to be sent to juvenile hall instead of prison.
Sending teenage offenders to juvenile hall could reshape their
behavior. These youths are the lawbreakers and they need to be
disciplined in order to stop them from repeating the same mistakes. In
“True Notebook”, Mark indicates two methods used by the officers to
control the youths, which are “Special Handling Unit” and “Lockdown”.
Jimmy Wu, Mark’s student, describes Box, another term of SHU, as a
“solitary confinement, with a video camera watching [them] 24/7”(36). It
is a brilliant way to isolate the youths who disobey the rules, such
as: fighting or smoking, for a couple of days as it allows them to
introspect on themselves, reflecting back on their action and attitude.
Students’ writing proves the effectiveness of this method. In their
writing, many of them said that if they are able to go back to the past,
they do not want contribute in a gang’s activities. They deeply
regretted for their action as one of the student wrote, “[i] can’t do
much about what happened except regret my stupidity and look towards the
future”(178). After that, to increase the disciplinary, sometimes the
youths are lockdown. It happens if a fight breaks out, then the whole
unit gets punished. By doing this, the youths’ disciplines are trained
and they learned to obey the rules. Juvenile justice system controls and
alters the youths’ behavior. Being sentenced to adult prison will only
worsen the juveniles’ situation as they are being locked with adults.
The juveniles are mixed up with adults that committed serious crimes and
they might influence the youths to commit an even more serious crime
than what they did. Hence, juvenile hall provides a good environment for the youths to stay away from having bad criminal’ minds.
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Placing
the delinquents to juvenile justice system is more suitable instead of
incarcerating them in the jails because they are treated properly inside
the juvenile hall. Steve Mitchell affirms that the youths are given 3
meals a day, 2 times of snacks and free time to socialize with the peers
every day. They are allowed to watch television in dayroom or play
sports just like other normal kids. Mark writes that juvenile justice
system provides nurse regulars that offer psychiatric medication for
those who need it. There are many youths who cannot stop thinking about
their cases. Jimmy, Mark’s student, states that when a guy loses his
cases there is high possibility that he might consider suicidal (36). In
this case, the nurses help the youths to prevent it through therapy and
teaching them how to improve their quality of life. Afterwards, the
juvenile hall also hosted sports Olympic which encourage the youths to
do other activities instead of creating chaos. Moreover, the juveniles
are also given various entertainment events such as cowboy show and
retreat for the writing class. The services and activities in juvenile
hall create a positive environment for the youths to change themselves.
The delinquents cannot be punished as adult because metallically, their
minds are still immature. If they are subjected to the same penalties as
adults, we are not giving them any chances to get better education or
any kind of rehabilitation. In short, imprison them is almost the same
as throwing their life away without giving them any hope to have a
better future.
The Juveniles are still young and we cannot take their life by punishing them in jails. By
sentencing them behind the bars, it would worsen their condition as the
adults might be a bad influence for them. We should give opportunities
for the youths to develop their talent in both academics and
non-academics. Lacking of education and guidance are the main reasons
why they are committing youth delinquency. In order to overcome that, we
ought to help them based on their needs. Throughout the juvenile
justice system, the youth being educated, matured and given a second
chance to show the society that they are not as bad as what people are
stereotyping about them. By treating the teenage offenders in the same
way as we treat the adults, it might create hatred inside them and they
might commit an even more serious crime once they are released to the
society. Therefore, the rehabilitation should be given and focused on
the delinquents.
1 comments:
My first impression about teenagers commit crime was very bad. I thought that they should be imprisoned until their dead are coming. Once we do something bad for the first time, there will be the second times, the third times and it goes for unlimited number. My believe is, if they are released without giving any punishment, they will reoffend it and cause harm to other people. Therefore, I was strongly disagreeing about the juvenile justice system.
After I read the book, my perspectives about the juvenile changes. Originally, none of the kids in the world are born to become a criminal. Their socialization process is the one who make them like that. They should be given a second chance to change themselves. Reading Mark’s book was very interesting for me. His experience tells us how we should treat them instead of judging them as bad people. Although I did get good score in this essay, but I learn lot of things.
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